7 thoughts on “Friday Flash 55 #18

  1. I agree, the change in perspective is good and really rounds out the story nicely. Since I always do these slash and burn things, what do you think about omitting the final sentence? Your preceding sentences have already shown us that, so I’m not sure you need to tell us as well.

    Good story!

  2. So…it wasn’t my intention to add this to the story. I just wanted to flash 55 from Kyle’s perspective. Do you think I should add it to the story? I didn’t know if the shift in POV would fit the ‘short story’format??
    What do you think?

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