Friday Flash 55 #14

Ali forced her eyes to open and tried to focus in the darkness when a voice in the back of her mind asked—Where is Micah?

Why isn’t he crying?

Where is Micah? Where is Micah?

As her mind continued to ask the question so did her lips. Before she realized it she was screaming. “Where is Micah?”


16 thoughts on “Friday Flash 55 #14

  • Oh yummy! I love “Embrace” teasers! A lot of drama in this one. More..More..I hope we begin editing soon!

  • I’m on the edge of my seat, desperate to know where Micah is and why he’s not crying!

  • Dayner: Just edit the damn thing and give us the whole enchilada! I’m with Shaddy on the edge of my — or her — seat.

  • Love it!! So creepy and unnerving and…I want to know what’s wrong with Micah!

  • parrotwrites

    I want to know who Micah is and why he is not crying too! Can’t wait to see the whole story.

  • I’ll make a Precious Embrace page soon. I just can’t decide which chapter to post.

  • Dayner,

    I’m posting this here so you’ll be sure to see it, though it really belongs under your previous post. last May I attended a writer’s workshop aboard a cruise ship to Alaska. At the end of the multi-day workshop, the three instructor-mentors read from their own works.

    Jack Hefron (Google him–he’s a big deal in publishing) paused mid-way into his reading. We waited. He suddenly realized where he was and apologized, saying that while this work had been published eight years prior, he had just seen something he wanted to rewrite.

    Moral: it never stops, Dayner. Never.

    • Thank you very much! It’s a good lesson. By the way, we have something in common. I lived in Alaska for several years. Although, I stayed close to the city–and the heater.
      If you don’t mind I would like to add you to my Blogroll.

  • You just had to say Earthquake the other day didn’t you. Could you feel it from where you are?

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